fictionpage Chapter 452: Shi Han’S Suggestion!
Chapter 452: Shi Han’S Suggestion!
About this question.
Tang Zixuan was eager to know.
Because now, she has made some money through writing articles, which can be regarded as a benefit.
so.
I want to learn something and have a deeper understanding.
And Shi Han has something to say.
Then she must listen.
After all, this girl may not have read many online articles, but she has succeeded in doing some things, so it is good to listen to her opinions...
Tang Zixuan supported her chin with both hands.
Just looked at Shi Han curiously.
To this.
Shi Han also became a little more serious.
"That's it! I think your beginning is very interesting. A boy becomes a girl, which makes you look forward to it!"
"Everyone will look forward to what you, the protagonist, will do next, what you think in your heart, and what outsiders think."
"Especially some 503 LSP readers want to see what strange actions you, the protagonist, will do next..."
Shi Han chuckled.
even though.
She didn't make it clear.
But Tang Zixuan thought about it and understood.
Even his eyes lit up.
actually.
She didn't think too much when she wrote it, but now after Shi Han's analysis, it seems pretty good?
Tang Zixuan felt that she was praised.
I was very happy.
"Xiaohan, Xiaohan, keep talking!"
"Ahem!"
Shi Han coughed twice, resisted the urge to laugh, and continued to look at Tang Zixuan seriously.
Start your own understanding!
"Although the beginning is very good, it lacks some conflicts that make people want to keep watching."
(aedb) "For example?" Tang Zixuan was extremely curious.
"For example, let's arrange a fiancé for the protagonist. This fiancé has never met the protagonist, and then the protagonist breaks off the engagement because of another girl!"
"ah?"
Tang Zixuan was stunned.
She really didn't expect it.
Shi Han would actually say such a thing!
but.
She thought about it carefully and realized that although what Shi Han said was a bit outrageous, it was indeed very conflicting!
The male protagonist has not met the protagonist, but he broke off the engagement.
Then when the time comes………….
If you meet the protagonist, you will be full of direct conflicts!
I feel like this story immediately makes people look forward to it!
Tang Zixuan was a little excited.
did not expect.
These few sentences are full of the truest and most practical truths!
Look at this woman's actions.
Shi Han smiled.
The way he held his chin with one hand looked a little careless, but there was a hint of forcefulness in it that made people want to lower their heads.
Somewhat rustic!
Shi Han raised the corner of his mouth and asked.
"How about Sister Zixuan, is the proposal I mentioned okay?"
"Not only is it possible, it's simply awesome!"
Tang Zixuan nodded immediately.
Subsequently.
Based on what Shi Han said, she began to show her understanding.
"I think it can be like this. The fiancé who broke off the engagement regretted it very much after seeing the protagonist and wanted to get her back. Then she ran away and he chased her. In the end, the protagonist was so troubled by the childbirth that he had no choice but to finally agree..."
This woman is still showing understanding.
.
My teeth immediately itched.
She really wanted to pick up a cabbage and hit her on the head to see what was inside.
But no.
He can only say it with hatred.
"You're poisoning people to death! Believe it or not, if you write like this, those readers will definitely abandon your book!"
"ah!?"
Tang Zixuan panicked.
Abandon the book after writing like this?!
She panicked, as if she had actually written it, and was thinking about how to remedy it.
But think clearly, I didn’t write it.
Just thinking about it.
Then I felt relieved.
But she also quickly asked Shi Han.
"Xiaohan Xiaohan! How should I write it so that it is not poisonous! If you hadn't reminded me, I would have really written it like this. If I followed what you said, it would really be over...
"well!"
Shi Han sighed.
Women are trouble!
but.
She didn't refuse and got up directly.
"Do you have more readers, boys or girls?"
"This, boy!"
"If you were a boy and later became a girl, do you think you would marry a boy? That would be gay! How disgusting!"
Shi Han spoke righteously and strictly.
Anyway.
She can't accept it and won't do it. This is simply outrageous!
result.
She thought wrong.
Although she thought so, Tang Zixuan began to think the opposite.
As soon as I heard Shi Han say this.
Her eyes actually lit up.
"Yes! Hmm! I think it's pretty good when I think about it, hehehehehe..."